New 2P Dialogue Test

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I found this sound clip from Dramapod.com and used it for final assignment of Pixar class 2.
I got a lots awesome acting critiques from Adam, Mike and Charles, and also got a super picky polishing critique from JD, thank you all, your comments and critiques always pull me out of the dark.
I was Polishing it during the first 2 week in summer semester. It looks like a endless cycle for me. So I decide to call it "final" for now, I think I will come back to fix it later when I get fresh eyes.

any comment? opinion? critique?